My question and opinion
about crime and punishment are why do young people turn to crime? What is the best way to stop them? Who do you think should be responsible for
this?
Why
do young people turn to crime?
I think there are two
reasons: lack of money and lack of relationship between people. First, they do not have enough money. This situation leads shortage of food or
homeless. As a result, they steal
something from grocery shop or fall into drug.
Secondly, they do not have good relationship with even their
family. If their parents have some
problems, they absolutely influence their children. Young people are more sensitive than adult
people imagine.
What
is the best way to stop them?
Government should
give minimum money. Also, we need to
find those families as much as possible before the situation is getting
worse.
Who
do I think should be responsible for this?
I think
the criminal should be responsible for what he or she did, because if a
government set strict rules for a crime or support those people, the certain number
of people commit a crime. So, we have
limit to stop them, and they have to have responsibility for their offense.
Your writing is very clear and easy to understand! The family problem is big issue to think about deeply.
ReplyDeleteI understood your article very much,too.I think the clearest part of your article is about reasons.I like it.
ReplyDeleteI feel like I can't do anything with thinking about terrible environment for children. We have to take out children from bad circulations.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you, Kayo. The family environment typically has an important influence on whether young people turn to crime or not. Child abuse, for example, often has a devastating effect on the development of individuals. Each member of society should watch out for instances of abuse in their communities and alert the authorities when necessary so both victims and their abusers can be helped.
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